RoboSmurfTacular
Aug 8 2007, 10:27 PM
I'm making a film about 100 members of a Christian club that go to the legendary hotel named The Homestead. There, they not only find arial sports, but new friends... On the way to a hiking group, the club gets lost and wonders into a cave that the government keep secret. There, they hear an entire Freemasons meeting, and something else that is top secret. So, now they hire a hitman to kill all the 100 people scatterd in the world even if his life depends on it...
I am making two sequels...
The American Assignment
American Assignment II: Hitman Rings Once
American Assignment III: Search for Death
What, do you think...
chicky06
Aug 8 2007, 11:34 PM
i think it is a little weak from what info you have, first off if this place is some top secrect cave and shit, then why would it be any where near a hiking path. So i take it the people escape from this cave, but how would all of them make it out of the cave, some would have to not make it i.e. taken by the masons and/or killed also it help to narrow down the characters a bit. Third the first story i think would have to be centered around how they make it out of the cave and where they plan to run to, along with the insuing chase they no doubt have through the woods and neighboring cities. could have a part where some try to rescue their friend from the masons cave to add character depth and shit. but all in all it sounds like a christian conspiracy film which will narrow your viewing pollution down if you don't write it carefully.
RoboSmurfTacular
Aug 12 2007, 07:23 PM
They are looking through a hole and one person trips over a rock - One man sees them through the hole and chases them, the leader gets shot.
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